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Mujh Se Itne “Qareeb” Ho Jao
Udaas Shab Ki “Saleeb” Ho Jao
Meri Baanhon Ko Sonp Do
Sab Kuch Meri Khatir “Ghareeb” Ho Jao
Mujh Mein Utro Mere Lahu Ki Tarhan
Meri Rooh Ke “Raqeeb” Ho Jao
Tum Jo Chu Lo Toh Dard Ghat Jaye
Aao Mere “Tabeeb” Ho Jao
Kuch Na Bolo Magar Kaho Sab Kuch
Aaj Aise “Khateeb” Ho Jao...........!!
(laila gul)



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Posted on April, 07 2012 11:58:24 PM


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Chale wo kadam kadam jo sath mere
To us k sath se pyar ho jaye
Thamay jo pyar se hath mera
To apne hath se pyar ho jaye
Jis raat aaye khwabon main wo
Us sohani raat se pyar ho jaye
Jis baat main aaye zikar tera
To ussi baat se pyar ho jaye
Jab pukare pyar se naam mera
To apne hi naam se pyar ho jaye
Hota hai itna khubsurat ye pyar agar
To kash tumhai b mere pyar se pyar ho jaye

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Posted on September, 05 2012 06:28:27 PM

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Maana ke Marne Walon ko Bhula Dete
Hain Sabhi,
Zinda ko BhoOl kr Tum ne to Riwayat
he Badal di..

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Posted on September, 05 2012 06:44:10 PM

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Agr hakekat na chupaty to kia krty?
Sach ko jhot na btaty to kia krty?
Jesy bhorusa tha humari wafa pe,
osy umeed ka daman na thamaty to kia krty?
ye to malum tha na askye gae lut k,
jhoty wady na krty to kia krty?
chara na tha waqt-e-rukhsat zabty gum k sewa..
Chupa k ashak na muskrty to kia krty!
Jab lekh cuka tha wo mukadar mei bicharna MEHEK,
phr khamoish sy sehry muhabat na chor jaty to kia krty?


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Posted on September, 05 2012 06:53:14 PM

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Ghar bana kar mere dil mein woh
chorr gaya,
Na khud rehta hai Na kisi aur ko
basney deta hai…

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Posted on September, 05 2012 06:58:41 PM

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Kabhi is nagar tujhe daikhna
Kabhi us nagar tujhe dhoondna
Kabi Raat bhar tujhe sochna
Kabi Raat bhar tujhe dhondna
Mera khwab tha k khyal tha
Wo urooj tha k zwaal tha
Teri yaad aye to ro dia
Jo to mil gia tuje kho dia
Mery silsily b ajeeb hy
Tuje chor kr tuje dhondna
Kabi Is Nagr
Kabi Us Nagr

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Posted on September, 05 2012 10:22:03 PM

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MOHABBAT! Jis Ke Bagher App Ki Zindagi Adhori Hay. Jis Ke Bagher Her Rishta Be Mayeni Hay. MOHABBAT Jis Ke Bagher Kainat Ka Her Rung Be Rung Hay. Jis Ke Bagher Her Ehsaas Khali Burtan Ki Terha. MOHABBAT. Jis Ke Bagher Insaan Bemool. MOHABBAT. Jo Anmool Bana Deti Hay Her Rishte Her Ehsaas Ko. Her Shey Her Rung Ko.

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Posted on September, 06 2012 12:45:52 AM

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Ek Shaks Pas Reh Ke Samjha Nahi Mujhe Is Baat Ka Malal Hai Shikwa Nahi Mujhe Main Us Ko Bewafai Ka Ilzam Kaisay Dou Us Ne To Ibteda Se Hi Chaha Nahi Mujhe Pathar Samajh Kar Paon? Se Thokr Laga Dia Afsos Teri Aankh Ne Parkha Nahi Mujhe Kya Umedein Baandh Kar Aaya Tha Samnay Us Ne To Aankh Bahr Ke Dekha Nahi Mujhe?!

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Posted on September, 06 2012 12:46:43 AM

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Meri zindgi mujhay ye bata,
Mujhay bhool ker tujhay kiya mila
Mere hasraton ka hisaab day
Dil tor ker tujhay kiya mila
Tere chaar din k pyaar se
Mujhay umar bhar ka gham mila
Main toot ker bikhar gaya
Mujhay tor ker tujhay kiya mila? . . .


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Posted on September, 06 2012 07:30:46 AM

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“Faraz” Mohabbat Ke iLawa Paas
Apnay Kuch Nahi
Isi Doulat Ko Ham Qismat Ke Maaray
Baant Laitay Hain

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Posted on September, 06 2012 08:14:41 AM

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nice ghazal and very well

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Posted on September, 06 2012 09:46:08 AM

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Yadain Jaag Jati Hai Barisho K Mosam Mai
Har Ghari Satati Hai Barisho K Mosam Mai
Shaam B Kisi Surat,Chain Se Nahi Kat-ti
Subhain B Satati Hai Barisho K Mosam Mai
Zehn K Jarokay Mai Jab Koyi Sadaa Obray
Aankain Bheeg Jati Hai, Barisho K Mosam Mai

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Posted on September, 06 2012 08:18:12 PM

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Is qadar qeemti to na tha mera chain-
o-sukoon.
Loot kar le gaya wo kisi anmol
khazane ki tarah…!

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Posted on September, 07 2012 05:56:53 AM

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khareed sakte unhe toh apni zindagi
dekar bhi khareed lete,,,
par kuch log “KEEMAT” se nahi
“KISMAT” se mila karte hain…!!

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Posted on September, 07 2012 05:57:54 AM

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Yeh jo lamhey Guzar gaey tum Bin?

Tum ne pocha Hai kis tarha se Guzrey hain ?

Tum ko malom Nahe hai jana..

Dukh ki is
Hijr-zda shab ki Jalan,

Dil pe rakhi woh Sabr ki salaib..

Roh mein utra Woh jankuni ka Azab..

Jism mein phailti Aziat ab.

Shab ki tanhai Mein ghut ghut K..

Lafz martey Rahey jab Merey Sab.

Khwab sab kho Gaey tareki Mein..

Soch bhi dour Khlaoun se Parey.

Kanpti ROH hai..

Merey ansoun ka DARYA hai..

MAIN hon..

Yeh SHAB hai..

TERA
CHEHRA HAI . . . . /

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Posted on September, 07 2012 06:03:51 PM

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Wo jo auron ko btata hai jeene k tariqay, Khud apni muthi mein meri jan liye betha hai…

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Posted on September, 08 2012 11:44:16 AM

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very nice yar,
net se search krny ki bjaey pak 101 se achi poetry mil skti he

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Posted on September, 08 2012 01:52:02 PM

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Mera..
Nahi or kuch bhi Tere siwa..
Meri Dosti
Meri Zindgi
Meri Khamoshi
Meri Be-basi
Mera ilm bhi
Mera Naam bhi
Meri Subah
Meri Shaam bhi
K Jo mil skein gey.jo ek nazar daikho gey tum hamain tu har taraf sirf hum hi ko paao ge.yaqeen apni mohabbat pe itna hai mujh ko mari chahat ko daikho ge tu lout aainy jb bhi us se talb kiya!!
Nai manga kuch bhi
Tere Siwa myri jaan


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Posted on September, 08 2012 10:59:50 PM

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Mohabbat hum ne ki jo ek khata ho gayi
Ki wafa or zindagi saza ho gayi
Wafa karte rahe hum ibadaton ki tarhan
Phir ibadat khud ek gunah ho gayi
Kitna suhana tha safar jab sath thay hum
Phir kia howa kyun manzil juda ho gayi
Koi chahat koi hasrat koi umeed nahi rahi
wo gaya to laga dunya fana ho gai


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Posted on September, 09 2012 10:46:33 AM

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Udaas Dil Ki Veeraniyon Mein Bikhar Gaye Hain Ghulab Saare,
Yeh Meri Basti Se Kon Guzra Nikhar Gaye Hain Ghulab Saare, Woh Door Ho To Haqeeqaton Par Saraab Ka Ek Gumaan Sa Ho,
Woh Pass Ho To Gumaan Ho Ke Haqeeqatein Hain Saraab Saare, Na Jane Kitni Shikayatein Hain Na Jane Kitne Gile Hain Dil Se,
Jo Unko Dekha To Bhool Baithe Sawal Saare Jawab Saare, Jo Tu Na Hota To Kis Tarah Meri Soch Ko Phir Haroof Milte,
Bas Ek Tumhi Ne De Diye Hain Kitaab Ko Meri Baab Saare.

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Posted on September, 09 2012 11:05:08 AM

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lo g main khud hi card tk pohnch gya hon
inhon ne to nai dia

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Posted on September, 09 2012 11:10:55 AM