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lailagul


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Subject : Mujh Se Itne “Qareeb” Ho Jao (closed)
Mujh Se Itne “Qareeb” Ho Jao
Udaas Shab Ki “Saleeb” Ho Jao
Meri Baanhon Ko Sonp Do
Sab Kuch Meri Khatir “Ghareeb” Ho Jao
Mujh Mein Utro Mere Lahu Ki Tarhan
Meri Rooh Ke “Raqeeb” Ho Jao
Tum Jo Chu Lo Toh Dard Ghat Jaye
Aao Mere “Tabeeb” Ho Jao
Kuch Na Bolo Magar Kaho Sab Kuch
Aaj Aise “Khateeb” Ho Jao...........!!
(laila gul)



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Posted on April, 07 2012 11:58:24 PM


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Rawish rawish hain golon ki tarah
naqash e qadam,
Wo log kon the jo hum se pesh tar ae.

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Posted on November, 01 2012 08:02:48 AM

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MOHABT To Barish Hai,Jise,Chone Ki Khwahish Me,Hatheliyan
To Geeli Ho Jati Hain, Mgar,"Hath''Hamesha Khali Hi Rehte Hain,,,

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Posted on November, 01 2012 11:10:29 AM

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Khusbo ko titliyon ke paro-n may chupaon ga

phir nely nely badlon may loot jaon ga

Dewana war muje sy lipat jay gi hawa

may surakh surakh pholo-n may jab muskuraon ga

Sony ke phol patty giray gy zameen par

may zard zard shakho par jab gungunao ga

Ye lakrdiyan jo kushk hy bey barg-o-bar hy

en ko may apni aag may jalna sikhao ga

Denaar khob barsy gi angan may sari raat

may khawab ke shajar ki wo shakh hilaon ga

Dhul jay gi badan pay jami dhoop ki teh

apny laho may aj may esa nahao ga

ek pal ki zindagi behad muje aziz hy

palkon pay jhilmilaon ga or phr toot jaon ga

Ye raat phir na aye gi badal barsny dy

may janta ho subh0 tuje bhol jao ga

Es din bajay os ke tapkay ga surakh khon

talwar ly kar jab may khalaon may jaon ga

Jab raat ke sappurd muje karna aon gy

romal raoshni ka hawa may urdaon ga

angan may nany nany farishty lardy gy jab

bhroii shafeeq akknho may,may muskoraon ga

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Posted on November, 01 2012 08:50:16 PM

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yar bohat ache ghazal ha ha ap ko bohat lagan ha poetry sa itne lagan whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Posted on November, 01 2012 09:59:02 PM

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Falak ne bhaij k sehra me abar ka
tukra,
Hum ehal e dashat ki tashna labi
bharha di hai.

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Posted on November, 02 2012 06:44:54 AM

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Aya hi ny ke hum ko ahista guzar jana

sheshy ka muqaddar rahy tukra ke bikhar jana

taron ki tarah shab ke seny may utar jana

ahat na ho qadmo ki es tarah guzar jana

nashy may samnbhlny ka fun yo hi ny aya

en zulfon sy sikha hy lehra ke sanwar jana

phir jay gy aknho may anchal sy bandy badal

yad ay ga jab pagal par shabnam ka bikhar jana

har mord par doo ankhe hum sy yahi kehti hy

jis tarah mumkin ho tum loot ke ghr jana

phathar ko mera saya ayena sa chamka dy

jana to mera shesha yun dard sy bhar jana

ye chand sitary tum oroo-n ke lieye rakh lo

hum ko yahi jena hy hum ko yahi marna hy

jab toot gia rishta sarsabz pahardo sy

phir tez hawa jany hum ko hy kdhar jana

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Posted on November, 02 2012 05:59:44 PM

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Mein Ne Ye Kab Kahaa Tha Mohabbat
Mein Hai Nijaat ?
Mein Ne Ye Kab Kahaa Tha Wafadaar
Hee Raho ?

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Posted on November, 03 2012 09:57:00 AM

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Bisaat e umer per mujh ko khasaara ho rha tha,
Main sooraj reh chuka tha, ab sitara ho rha tha,
Bazahir khaak k urrnay ki batain ho rahi theen,
Haqeeqat main meri jaanib ishaara ho rha tha,
Guzaaray ja rhay thay meri aankhon say manaazir,
Or is tarteeb say mera nazaara ho rha tha,
Hmaraz khaal o khad nay teri aankhain dekh li theen,
So aaeenay main pathar aashkaara ho rha tha,
Bulandi ki sdaain door hoti ja rahi theen,
Nashebon say mujhay aisa eshaara ho rha tha..

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Posted on November, 03 2012 10:57:41 AM

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Qissa’go mere gaaon ke sach kehte they,
Pyar kahani dard bhari reh jati hai..

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Posted on November, 03 2012 01:12:45 PM

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Kuch Tou Ehsaas-e-Ziyaan Tha Phele
Dil Ka Ye Haal Kahan Tha Phele
Ab Tou Manzil Bhi Hai Khud Garm-e-Safar
Har Qadam Sang-e-Nishaan Tha Phele
Safar-e-Shoq Ke Farsang Na Pooch
Waqt Be-Qaid Makaan Tha Phele
Ye Alag Baat Ke Gham Raas Hai Ab
Is Mein Andaisha-e-Jaan Tha Phele
Yun Na Ghabraye Howay Phirtay Thay
Dil Ajab Kunj-e-Amaan Tha Phele
Ab Bhi TU Paas Nahi Hai Laikin
Is Qadar Door Kahan Tha Phele
Dairay Daalay Hain Bagolon Ne Jahan
Os Taraf Chashm-e-Rawaan Tha Phele
Har Kharab Ye Sadaa Deta Hai
Mein Bhi Aabaad Makaan Tha Phele
Kia Se Kia Ho Gayi Dunya Pyaaray
TU Waheen Per Hai Jahaan Tha Phele
Ham Ne Aabaad Kia Mulk-e-Sukhan
Kaisa Sunsaan Samaa Tha Phele
Ham Ne Bakshi Hai Khamoshi Ko Zabaan
Dard Majboor-e-Fugaan Tha Phele
Ham Ne Roshan Kia Maamoor-e-Gham
Warna Har Simt Dhuwaan Tha Phele
Gham Ne Phir Dil Ko Jagaya “Nasir”
Khana-e-Barbaad Kahan Tha Phele

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Posted on November, 03 2012 01:13:30 PM

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Hamara dard hamri dukhi nawa sy lardy

sulagti aag kabhi sir-pheri hawa sy lardy

may janta ho ke anjam-kar kia ho ga

akeela patta agr hawa sy lardy

mery aziz muje qatal kr ke phenk atay

bhaly hawa ke mery lab meri sada sy lardy

sonehri machliyan badal may kod jati hy

badan wahi hy jo bandish may bhi qoba sy lardy

siyah barf may tuthry hy kainat meri

koi sitara uthy toot kar khala sy lardy

tamam rat ki khon raiz jang ka hasil

bohat andehra tha pany hi dost sy dipa sy lardy

tumhary shehar may kia hogia tha,jis ke lieye

basheer roty hy khuda sy lardy

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Posted on November, 04 2012 12:49:18 AM

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Rait pe thak ke gira hoon to hawaa
poochti hai,
Aap is dasht mein kyon aye they
wehshat ke bagher..

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Posted on November, 04 2012 08:13:48 AM

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Hanste huye logon ko rulaya nahin karte,
Hum apna koi zakham dikhaya nahin karta,
Ik bar jisy apni nigahon se gira dain,
Phir us ko kabhi dil mein basaya nahin karte,
Us sakhs se mil kar mujhe ehsas hua hai,
Jo pairr barre hote hain saaya nahin karte,
Rakhte hain unhe hum sadaa seeney se laga kar,
Dukh apna kisi ko bhi sunaya nahin karte,
Yeh khel mohabbat ka hai phir soch lo Arshad,
Kho dete hain yahan sab kuch paaya nahin karte..

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Posted on November, 04 2012 09:48:56 AM

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Kuch Tou Ehsaas-e-Ziyaan Tha Phele
Dil Ka Ye Haal Kahan Tha Phele
Ab Tou Manzil Bhi Hai Khud Garm-e-Safar
Har Qadam Sang-e-Nishaan Tha Phele
Safar-e-Shoq Ke Farsang Na Pooch
Waqt Be-Qaid Makaan Tha Phele
Ye Alag Baat Ke Gham Raas Hai Ab
Is Mein Andaisha-e-Jaan Tha Phele
Yun Na Ghabraye Howay Phirtay Thay
Dil Ajab Kunj-e-Amaan Tha Phele
Ab Bhi TU Paas Nahi Hai Laikin
Is Qadar Door Kahan Tha Phele
Dairay Daalay Hain Bagolon Ne Jahan
Os Taraf Chashm-e-Rawaan Tha Phele
Har Kharab Ye Sadaa Deta Hai
Mein Bhi Aabaad Makaan Tha Phele
Kia Se Kia Ho Gayi Dunya Pyaaray
TU Waheen Per Hai Jahaan Tha Phele
Ham Ne Aabaad Kia Mulk-e-Sukhan
Kaisa Sunsaan Samaa Tha Phele
Ham Ne Bakshi Hai Khamoshi Ko Zabaan
Dard Majboor-e-Fugaan Tha Phele
Ham Ne Roshan Kia Maamoor-e-Gham
Warna Har Simt Dhuwaan Tha Phele
Gham Ne Phir Dil Ko Jagaya “Nasir”
Khana-e-Barbaad Kahan Tha Phele

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Posted on November, 04 2012 07:11:37 PM

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Tere bagair ye ab zindagi kahaan guzrey,
Qadam qadam pe tere saath ka gumaan guzre..

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Posted on November, 04 2012 07:14:49 PM

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Chehra koi bhi aankh main thehra na phir kabhi,
Dil ne kisi bhi shakhss ko chaha na phir kabhi,
Rootha zara si baat pe uth ke chala geya,
Aesa geya ke laut ke aaya na phir kabhi,
Kuch yu’n mila tapaak* se bass ishq ho geya,
Woh ajnabi tha kaun tha socha na phir kabhi,
Us ne bataur* tohfa diya libaas-e-hijar,
Pehna jo aik baar utaara na phir kabhi,
Dulat mili to chinn gayi ehsaas ki qubaa*,
Us ne mera mizaaj bhi poocha na phir kabhi,
Nazish guzar chuka tha hadh-e-etdaal* se,
Jane kahan geya usey dekha na phir kabhi..

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Posted on November, 04 2012 07:15:29 PM

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Hamari shohrato ki moot by namo nisha-n ho gay

na koi tazkira ho ga na koi dastan ho gi

Agar mai lotna chaho tu kia may lut sakta ho

wo dunya sat jo mery chali thi

Parinday apni munqaro may sab sab tary chupa ly gy

jawani char din ki chandni hy phir kaha ho gi

Darakhto ki ye chaley utar jay gi, pattay kia

Ye dunya dhiry dhiry ek din phir sy jawa-n ho gi

Hawaen raoy gi- sir phordh ly gi en pahardo sy

kabhi jab badlon mai chand ki doli rawa-n ho gi

Kisy maloom tha -Hum log ek bistar pay soyen gy

Hifazat ke lieye talwar apny darmiyan ho gi

pasina band kamre ki ams ka jazba hai us mai

Humare tolye main dhoop ki khushbo kahan ho gi

Kisi gumnam pathar par bohat say nam likh do gay

To qurbani humari us tarha se javedan ho gi

Zameenen to meri ajrad ne sari ganwa di hain

Magar ye aik muthi khak kuhd apna nish-n ho gi

Samandar bordhey ho jaengay or ik fahisha machli

Humare sahilon or junglon ki hukmara-n ho gi

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Posted on November, 04 2012 09:56:37 PM

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Woh Nadiyan Nahi Aansu They Mere
Jinpar Woh Kashti Chalate Rahe
Manzil Mile Unhein Yeh Chahat Thi Meri
Isliye Hum Aansu Bahate Rahe

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Posted on November, 05 2012 07:41:13 AM

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Es lieye bhi raat ko ghar sy nikal ata ho may
sardiyon ke chand ko ehsas-y tanhai na ho


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Posted on November, 05 2012 09:47:30 AM

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Taabeer Dhoondta Hun Mein Apne Liye,
Aur Khwaab Dekhta Hun Kisi Aur Ke Liye,,,,

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Posted on November, 05 2012 04:35:18 PM