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lailagul


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Subject : Mujh Se Itne “Qareeb” Ho Jao (closed)
Mujh Se Itne “Qareeb” Ho Jao
Udaas Shab Ki “Saleeb” Ho Jao
Meri Baanhon Ko Sonp Do
Sab Kuch Meri Khatir “Ghareeb” Ho Jao
Mujh Mein Utro Mere Lahu Ki Tarhan
Meri Rooh Ke “Raqeeb” Ho Jao
Tum Jo Chu Lo Toh Dard Ghat Jaye
Aao Mere “Tabeeb” Ho Jao
Kuch Na Bolo Magar Kaho Sab Kuch
Aaj Aise “Khateeb” Ho Jao...........!!
(laila gul)



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Posted on April, 07 2012 11:58:24 PM


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Aap paas raho ya dur
Hum dil se dil ki aawaj mila sakte hain
Na khat, na telephone ke mohtaz hai hum
Aap ke dil ko hichkiyon se hila sakte hai hum

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Posted on October, 25 2012 10:59:23 PM

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Suno Tumhay Ijazat Hai Meri Ghazlo Ko Parhney Kee,

Sirf Iltija Hai Itni:!

Meri Ghazlo Kay Kuch Hiso Mai Meri Bey Basi Kay Qisey Hain,

Ager Tum Un Ghazlo Kay Un Hiso Tuk Ja Pohncho,

Jidhar Tumhara Naam Aa Jaye
Tou Tum Yeh Farz Ker Layna,

Mehaz Yeh Aik Kahani Hai,

Jis Mai Aik Raja Hai
Na Uski Koi Rani Hai

Suno Tumhy Izazat Hai
Ager Tum Parhna Cha Ho Tou..


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Posted on October, 25 2012 11:00:13 PM

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KAbI kaBi soChta ho Kisi QatIl k
haWaly kar don Zindigi Apni
yun Roz Roz judayi mAin mujh Sa
marra nAhe jata.

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Posted on October, 26 2012 07:33:19 AM

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Hum ko bhi apni moot ka pora yaqeen hy

par dushmano ke mulak may ek muba-e habeen hy

Sir pay khardy hay,chand sitary bohat magar

insan ko jo bojh uthay zameen may hy

Ye akhri chargh osi ko bujhany do

es basti may wo sab sy ziada haseen hy

takye ke nechy rakhta hy tasveer ki kitab

tahrero guftago may jo itna muteen hy

Yaroon ny jis pay apni dukain sajain hay

khusbo bata rahi hy,hamari zameen hy

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Posted on October, 26 2012 02:40:15 PM

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Koi aaj tak na badal sakaa yeh usool
gulshan-e-zeest ka…
wohi phool nazr-e-khizaan hoa Jisy
aitabar-e-bahaar tha..

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Posted on October, 27 2012 12:10:37 AM

rashidfarooqz


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Kabhi Meharban Tha Tu Kabhi Anjan Tha.
Mera Wehem Tha Ya Woh Mera Guman Tha.
Dey Kar Zakham Woh Marham Rakhta Tha.!
Ban Raha Tha Ya Waqai Woh Itna Nadan Tha.
Mujh Sy Bichar Gaya Tha Woh Ek Raat.!
Woh Shakhs Ju Kal Tak Meri Pehchan Tha,
Kash K Woh ban Jata Hamara Hamdam.!
Kitna Dil Ko Es Baat Ka Arman Tha.
Khuda Ko Chahtey Itna Tu Kuch Mil Bhi Jata
HamNy Chaha Jis Ko Afsos wo ik insan tha.. …

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Posted on October, 28 2012 09:47:05 AM

saim14399


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Ye to ek zid hai k mohsin main
shikayat na karun…
Warna shikwey to hain itne mere yaar
k bs..!!

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Posted on October, 28 2012 11:37:15 AM

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Dehakti dhoop samundar hy,ye jazeery hay

ghany darakht jo sardko pay saya karty hay

Ajeeb shehar hy ye ass ke asma-n pay bhi

laho may doby howy surakh surakh doory hay

wo koi or tha shab-e khon marny wala

hamey na maro ke hum bhi be zarar farishty hay

Ye phattron ka hy jungle chalo yahan sy chalen

Hamary pas tu geeli zamee-n ke poodeyn hay


Phir en ke nechy darindo ke nam kis ny likhy

hameyn yaqeen hy ye sab hamary chehreyn hay

Azeem dushmano,chaqo chalao moqa hy

hamari hath hamri qamar ke pechy hay

Kahanyon kay bateyn such hoi jesy

sonehry shehar samundar may behty rehty hay

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Posted on October, 28 2012 02:45:15 PM

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Kitny haseen khoaab thy par koch na pa saky,
hum apny dil ki bat zobaan par na la saky,
pheloo bachaia ap ny esa k os ghari,
rasta saja saky na hum ankhyn bichaa saky,
sary dokhoon ko bhool gay pher bhe jan-e-jan,
hum ap ko na ap ki yadyn bhola saky,
kitny haseen log thy or dil roba bhe thy,
thama kisi ka haat na tum ko mana saky,
kia phochty ho hum sy molakat ki kthaa,
hum sy hoi hy bat na ankhyn milaa saky,
hum ho gay hyn on k dilo jan sy AMEEN,
warna majaal kis ki thi hum ko jhoka saky….

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Posted on October, 28 2012 11:02:33 PM

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Hansnay P Bhi Aa Jatay hain Be Sakhta
Aanso.
Kuch log Mujhay Aisi Dua day k Gy
hain ..!!

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Posted on October, 29 2012 04:17:25 AM

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Jo idhar sy ja raha hy wahi muje pay meharban hay

kabhi aag pasban hy kabhi dhoop saiban hay

Bardi arzoo thi muje say koi khak ro ke kehti

utara meri zamee-n par tu hi mera asma-n hy

Mai esi guma mai barso barda mutmain raha ho

tera jisam barda tagheer,mera piyar jaoweda-n hay

kabhi surakh momi shamy waha phir sy jal saky gi

wo lakhori ento-n ka jo barda sa ek maka-n hy

Sabhi baraf ke makano pay kafan bicheyn hay lekin

ye dhowa bata raha raha hy abhi aaj bhi yahan hy

Koi aaj jesy kohry mai dabi dabi si chamkey

teri jhilmilati aknho may ajeeb sa sam-n hy

Enhey raston ny jin par kabhi tum thy mery sath

muje rok rok pucha tera hum safar kaha hy

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Posted on October, 29 2012 04:44:31 PM

saim14399


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Rah-e-Mohabbat Main Ajab Pathraon
Se Raha Wasta
Naa Zakham Nazar Aata Hai Naa Dard
Saha Jata Hai……..!!!

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Posted on October, 29 2012 09:31:39 PM

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ab aany waly behla kar chaly gay

ankho par sheshy chamka kar chaly gay

Malbay ke nechy a kar maloom howa

sab kesy dewar gira kar chaly gay

Agar kabhi loten gay rakh batoren gay

jungle mai jo aag laga ka rchaly gay

May tha din tha or ek lamba rasta tha

sab khemay jab log utha kar chaly gay

Chattano par a kar tehray do rastay

phir agy ek rah bana kar chaly gay

Kuch esy bachy bhi ay maktab may

nam likhaya nam likha kar chaly gay

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Posted on October, 29 2012 10:10:36 PM

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Soyaa Hay Mujh Ko Bhool K Ek Shaks
Aaj Shab
” Shayad Issi Wajha Say Tabiyat Udaas
Hay ”

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Posted on October, 30 2012 04:38:16 AM

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?? "Log Kehty Hain K Muhabbat Ek Baar Hoti Hain ?
?? Aay Rashid ??
?? Main Jab Jab Usay Daikhoon Mujhey Har Bar Hoti Hain

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Posted on October, 30 2012 09:36:09 AM

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Phol sa kuch kalam or sahi

ek ghazal os ke nam or sahi

Es ki zulfain bohat ganheri may

ek shab ka qiyam or sahi

Zindagi ke udas qisay may

ek lardki ka nam or sahi

Kurciyon ko sunaieye ghazlay

katal ki ek sham or sahi

kapkapati hy raat seny may

zehar ka ek jam or sahi

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Posted on October, 30 2012 08:15:40 PM

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Me bhi dekhunga usey mang kar ek
din,
Log kehte he mango toh khuda deta
hai..

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Posted on October, 31 2012 05:21:53 AM

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Hamare Bol Perne Se
Judaayi Phhail Sakti Hai
Hawaun Main
Fizaaaaon Main

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Posted on October, 31 2012 12:24:48 PM

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Un ka aana sirf mere khuawb tak
mehdood hai,
Raabta hote hoye bhi raabta koi
nahin….

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Posted on October, 31 2012 05:59:43 PM

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Wo ny hy tu os ki aas rahy

ek jay tu ek pas rahy

Jan bhi kasny laga,utar diya

es badan par kai libas rahy

Ek din may agr laho pi lo

kai din bartaon may baas rahy

Dono ek dosry ka muin dekhy

aeyna, aeyny ke pas rahy

Aja hum sab ke sat khob hansy

or phir dair tka udas rahy

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Posted on October, 31 2012 09:13:29 PM