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Mujhse pocha bahaaro ne
kahan gaya tera humsafr......??
tujhay to bara naaz tha us pr
ye sun kr me muskura diya.....
or usay ye batla diya......
milna qismat me tha
bichrna naseeb tha.........
wo itna door ho gaya mujhse
jitna mere qareeb tha......
meri ye mohabbat hai...
jo ab tk us k saath hai
wo nahi paas mere
bs itni c baat hai..................





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Posted on March, 07 2011 01:17:13 PM


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nyce!

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Posted on March, 07 2011 01:18:43 PM

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hmmmm nice

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Posted on March, 07 2011 01:21:22 PM

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Mere pass magar alfaz nahi

tum raah ho, tum hi manzil bhi
mera aur koi humraaz nahi
Mai tum pe yeh zaahir to kar doon
Mere paas magar alfaaz nahi

Tumhaare Ghar par jhoomti ghataaon mein
meri aarzoo hai ghuli hui
Mere iqraar ki khushboo
tumhaari saari fizaa mei hai ghuli hui

Yeh hawaa, yeh fizaa, yeh ghataa, sabko hai pataa
Tum ko bhi yaqienan ilm hai, mera tumse chhupaa koi raaz nahi
Mai tum pe yeh zaahir to kar doon
Mere paas magar alfaaz nahi..(

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Posted on March, 07 2011 01:22:42 PM

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maryprincess60 said:

Mere pass magar alfaz nahi

tum raah ho, tum hi manzil bhi
mera aur koi humraaz nahi
Mai tum pe yeh zaahir to kar doon
Mere paas magar alfaaz nahi

Tumhaare Ghar par jhoomti ghataaon mein
meri aarzoo hai ghuli hui
Mere iqraar ki khushboo
tumhaari saari fizaa mei hai ghuli hui

Yeh hawaa, yeh fizaa, yeh ghataa, sabko hai pataa
Tum ko bhi yaqienan ilm hai, mera tumse chhupaa koi raaz nahi
Mai tum pe yeh zaahir to kar doon
Mere paas magar alfaaz nahi..(

hmmmm very nice... kyaa baat hai g....

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Posted on March, 07 2011 06:05:50 PM

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shukriya (.......)

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Posted on March, 07 2011 06:06:56 PM

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maryprincess60 said:

shukriya (.......)

hmmmm samjh gya hon...

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Posted on March, 07 2011 06:16:25 PM

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samajhdar insaan ho

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Posted on March, 07 2011 06:25:59 PM

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bs nice................

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Posted on March, 07 2011 07:13:08 PM

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v nice dear...

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Posted on March, 07 2011 08:13:20 PM

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nice...

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Posted on March, 07 2011 09:14:42 PM

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main nae is page ko top sae dekha hie sab nay is sairy ko nice very nice kaha hie. par koi ye bataie ga k is shairy ka kisi matlab samjh main aaya hie?

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Posted on March, 07 2011 09:16:56 PM

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main ne is tor se tujhey chaha aksar
jaisey mehtab ko be ant samandar chahey
jaisey sooraj ki kiran seap k dil main utrey
jaisey khoshbo ko hawa rang se hat kar chahay
jaisey pathar k kalejy se kiran photti hay
...jaisey ghunchay khiley mousam se hina mangtey hain
jaisey khoabon main khayalon ki kaman totti hay
jaisey barish ki doa aabla pa mangtey hain
mera har khoab merey sach ki gawahi de ga
wosat_e_deed ne tujh se teri khahish ki hay
meri soochoon main kabhi dekh sarapa apna
main ne dunya se alag teri parasthis ki hay


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Posted on March, 07 2011 09:33:26 PM

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aroonawarsia2007 said:

main nae is page ko top sae dekha hie sab nay is sairy ko nice very nice kaha hie. par koi ye bataie ga k is shairy ka kisi matlab samjh main aaya hie?

Ohh we forgot that only you are genius here who can understand this poetry..
none of others can yea.... thanks dear..

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Posted on March, 07 2011 09:33:38 PM

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nice topic ki waja se nahi balke jo shair likhe howe hain un ki waja se kaha hay

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Posted on March, 07 2011 09:34:17 PM

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Rona toh aaj kal dikhawa he,
Jaane ke baad koi dhota nhe..
mayyat pe ate rukha chehra lekar,
par dilse kisiko koi khota nhe.

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Posted on March, 07 2011 10:42:16 PM

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Tere Dar Pe Baith Jaunga



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Posted on January, 04 2012 03:54:28 PM

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maryprincess60 said:

Mujhse pocha bahaaro ne
kahan gaya tera humsafr......??
tujhay to bara naaz tha us pr
ye sun kr me muskura diya.....
or usay ye batla diya......
milna qismat me tha
bichrna naseeb tha.........
wo itna door ho gaya mujhse
jitna mere qareeb tha......
meri ye mohabbat hai...
jo ab tk us k saath hai
wo nahi paas mere
bs itni c baat hai..................



nice

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Posted on January, 04 2012 10:04:19 PM

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Aaya hi tha khayal k ankain chalak gahain.
Aanson kisi k yaad k kitne qareeb thy....

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Posted on January, 04 2012 10:04:54 PM

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wah nice

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Posted on January, 04 2012 10:18:43 PM

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Banty bantay apny pech-o-kham banay
main bana,phir tuu bna, phir hum banay

aankh ban'ny main bahut din lag gaye
dekhiye kb aankh andar nam banay

hum kahan thay us samay us waqt jb
teray andar k ye sb mosam banay

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Posted on January, 05 2012 12:30:35 AM