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sohaib147taha


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Subject : bait bazi challange
andaz apna aainay main dekhte hain wo..........
ar ye b dekhtay hain koi dekhta na ho...........


ha kisi k pas muqablay ka shair


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Posted on July, 07 2012 09:35:23 PM


khuramms


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Lo Saim bhai 1 aur competitor agaya hai aap ka

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Posted on November, 01 2012 06:25:21 PM

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Ishq ne seekh li hai waqt ki taqseem ke ab,
Woh mujhe yaad to aata hai magar kaam ke baad..

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Posted on November, 01 2012 08:44:21 PM

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Faraz us ne wafa ki k bewafai ki,
Jawabda to humen hain sawal jo bhi
ho.

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Posted on November, 02 2012 06:45:54 AM

rashidfarooqz


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Hay ajeeb dil ke halat her shay hoe paraaie
Meray dil main busnay walay teri yad phir say aaye

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Posted on November, 02 2012 05:49:03 PM

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Shayad Ke Mein Phir Sota Rahuun
Hashar Talak…
Ik Aadh Tou Rat-Jagaa Manaa Le Mere
Saath ???

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Posted on November, 03 2012 09:46:55 AM

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Apne hathon se hi pathar hi bana li aankhain,
Hum ne chehre pe kisi taur saja li aankhain,
Apne hi ghar mein kya khoon kharaba aesa,
Bhai kehte hain bhai ki nikalin aankhain,
Dhoop ko dekh ke chaaon ka lagaya khaiyma*,
Saaye ko dekh ke maathey pe saja li aankhain,
Itni ankhon ka tha ankhon mein thehrna mushkil,
Hum ne is waastey har ik se chura li aankhain,
Jesi ankhon ke tassavur mein phira katte hain,
Hum ne kaghaz pe Hassan wesi bana li aankhain.

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Posted on November, 03 2012 10:58:13 AM

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Dikhaa na yunhi vasl ki rut ke khawb mujhe,
Ke maar de na kahin hijar ka azaab mujhe,
Qadam qadam mere raste mein wehshiyon ka hajoom,
Nagar nagar liye phirta hai iztraab mujhe,
Ajeeb vehm-o-gumaan aankh main utar aye,
Dikhaayi deta hai daryaa ab bhi saraab mujhe,
Tumhare honton pe bikhrey koi to rang-e-sadaa,
Tumhari aankhon se aaye koi jawaab mujhe,
Bohat dinon se khazaaon ki zad main hoon Shahbaz,
Jo ho sake to kabhi bhejnaa gulaab mujhe..

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Posted on November, 03 2012 01:12:34 PM

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Chalo usey dil hi dil main chahain,
Sunaa hai dil ko dil se raah hoti hai..

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Posted on November, 03 2012 01:13:21 PM

rashidfarooqz


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Karain jo beth kar batain to baat ban jaye,
Ke baat aik hi karte hain mil ke lab dono..

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Posted on November, 04 2012 01:20:43 AM

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Uski Baatain Theen Riwaayat Se Hatt
Kar Mohsin,
Sab Mein Rehta Tha Magar Sab Se
Judaa Lagta Tha…!

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Posted on November, 04 2012 07:59:37 AM

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Aaye khuda kiya cheez mohabbat tu ne banai hai,
Kisi ko yeh mil jati hai aur koi sehta umar bhar ki tanhai hai,
Saath chalne ke khawab dekhte hain Jo log mohabbat main,
Koi paa leta hai apni manzil ko aur koi sehta Umar bhar ki judaai hai..

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Posted on November, 04 2012 03:52:18 PM

brightsky2020


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Dikhaa na yunhi vasl ki rut ke khawb mujhe,
Ke maar de na kahin hijar ka azaab mujhe,
Qadam qadam mere raste mein wehshiyon ka hajoom,
Nagar nagar liye phirta hai iztraab mujhe,
Ajeeb vehm-o-gumaan aankh main utar aye,
Dikhaayi deta hai daryaa ab bhi saraab mujhe,
Tumhare honton pe bikhrey koi to rang-e-sadaa,
Tumhari aankhon se aaye koi jawaab mujhe,
Bohat dinon se khazaaon ki zad main hoon Shahbaz,
Jo ho sake to kabhi bhejnaa gulaab mujhe..

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Posted on November, 04 2012 07:09:56 PM

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Roshni kar raha hai is dil mein,
Ik diya sa jala hai is dil mein,
Dar hai aankhen na phir chalak jayen,
Ik kaanta chubha hai is dil mein,
Jis ke saarey makaan khali hain,
Sheher aesa basaa hai is dil mein,
Gungunaane lagi hain saansain bhi,
Koi rehne laga hai is dil mein,
Koi jis ka nahin ilaaj Arshad,
Dard aesa uthaa hai is dil mein..

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Posted on November, 04 2012 07:12:14 PM

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Sach kahoon mujh ko ye unwan bura lagta hay,
Zul’m sehta hua insan bura lagta hai,


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Posted on November, 04 2012 07:14:03 PM

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Raaz-e-Ulfat Chhupa Ke Dekh Lia
Dil Bohat Kuch Jalaa Ke Dekh Lia
Aur Kia Dekhnay Ko Baaki Hai ?
Aap Se Dil Lagaa Ke Dekh Lia
Wo Mere Ho Ke Bhi Mere Na Howay
Un Ko Apna Banaa Ke Dekh Lia
Aaj Unki Nazar Mein Kuch Ham Ne
Sab Ki Nazrain Bacha Ke Dekh Lia
“Faiz” Takmeel-e-Gham Bhi Na Ho Saki
Ishq Ko Aazmaa Ke Dekh Lia

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Posted on November, 04 2012 07:15:45 PM

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Gar na ho suurat to seerat hi sahi
Kuch to hona chahiye insaan main..

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Posted on November, 04 2012 10:18:51 PM

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Kabhi Dil Ko Kabhi Shamma Ko Jala Kar
Roye
Teri Yaad Ko Dil Se Laga Kar Roye
Raat Ki God Mein Jab So Gayi Duniya
Sari
Chand Ko Teri Tasveer Banaker Roye

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Posted on November, 05 2012 07:12:11 AM

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qadam barhao?? Hath milao
pakistan bantay jao
her ik fard hai pakistan
pakistan ki hum pehchaan
pakistan hamari jaan
her ik fard hai pakistan
waqt hai kathin
chahiye janon
mulk o qoam ko
aao kar dein surkhuru
bharhayein apnay watan ki shaan
her ik fard hai pakistan
manzil ki justaju
dil mein hum rakhein
mehnat karein sabhi
maza jeet ka chakhein
karein taskheer her maidaan
her ik fard hai pakistan
pakistan ki hum pehchaan
pakistan hamari jan
her ik fard hai pakistan

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Posted on November, 05 2012 09:57:58 AM

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Jo Aala Zarf Hote Hain, Woh Sar Kham Hi Rakhtey Hain
Surahi Khud Nagoon Ho Kar Bhara Karti Hai Paimaney

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Posted on November, 05 2012 10:04:36 AM

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Badan Bhi Hashr Bapaa Dharrkano Main Kar-taa Hai
Phir Uss Peh Chulnaa Qe-yaamat Ki Chaaal Hotaa Hai


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Posted on November, 05 2012 10:50:40 AM