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naveedanjumjavaid


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Subject : Tanhai Mein
Tanhai mein ajeeb zamaney ki wafa dekhta raha
Umer bhar apna ghar tanha dekhta raha

Kahin na kahin to badal hi jatay hain silsilay
Magar main jahan gaya sehra dekhta raha

Jane kyun qatratay hain log mujhe milne say
Kal shab dair talak aaina dekhta raha

Pani mangte magte meray honth pathar ho gaye
Woh shaks mashkiza liye khara dekhta raha

Be-gunah tha phir bhi sir jhukaye hue
Sitam-gar ki sitam ki inteha dekhta raha

Umar bhar mohabbat ka kuch youn silsila raha
Main usay or woh duniya dekhta raha

Kahon ga KHUDA se youm-e-hisaab ko MOHSIN
Ke zamana meri barbadi ka tamasha dekhta raha

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Posted on March, 29 2012 02:27:38 PM


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yaar 1 page bana lete apni sari poetries ka liya

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Posted on March, 29 2012 04:20:59 PM

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shairy to hy.
Par
Us me dham nai hy.
Phr b tmhary lia.5 points
Hmmm

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Posted on March, 31 2012 01:39:42 AM

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Buhet khoob

marvelous poetry

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Posted on April, 02 2012 03:34:46 AM

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Chahat Ki Be-basi Ka Ye Qissa Hai Mukhtasar,
Dil Ne Sakoon Na Paaya Kabhi, Dil Lagi K Baad.

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Posted on April, 02 2012 01:08:20 PM

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Owais

uffffffff
dukhi aatma


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Posted on April, 02 2012 02:59:22 PM

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omer

bhai am very chill phill person
but its just my like

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Posted on April, 03 2012 12:25:03 PM

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Owais

to shair to aesy post kiye hain
jesy nakami ho gaye ishq main

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Posted on April, 03 2012 06:07:46 PM

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OMER
O lala apni apni choice hai


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Posted on April, 05 2012 01:10:03 PM

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Geelay Kaagaz Ki TarhaN Hai Zindagi Apni,
Koi Likhta bi Nahi Aur Koi Jalaata bi Nahi,

Is Qadar Akailay Ho Gaye Hain Aaj Kal,
Koi Satata bi Nahi Aur Koi Manaata bi Nahi…

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Posted on April, 05 2012 02:09:08 PM

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Owais

Nakam Aashiq

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Posted on April, 06 2012 06:30:15 AM

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samjh gaya kis ko bol rahe hoooo

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Posted on April, 06 2012 11:36:56 AM

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bohut umdah shairi hai...

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Posted on April, 06 2012 11:37:53 AM

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yaaad karlo jaldi se
kahen topic close na ho jae

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Posted on April, 06 2012 11:39:03 AM

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poetry section alag hona chahye,,,


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Posted on April, 06 2012 05:25:38 PM

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maine samandar se seekhi hai paani ki parda daari...

uppar se hanste rehna gehraaiyon main ro lena

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Posted on April, 07 2012 01:19:33 AM

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owsum omer ya lo phir 1 meri taraf se bhe


Kab kaun kisi ka hota hai
Sub jhootey rishtey naate hain…

Sub dil rakhney ki batein hain
Sub asal roop chhupate hain…

Ikhlaq se khali log yahan
Lafzon ke teer chalate hain…

I baar nigahon mein aakar
Phir saari umar rulate hain…

Who jis NE diye hain ashk humein
AB us ko bhool hi jaate hain…

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Posted on April, 07 2012 10:29:41 AM

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Abhi bhi waqt hai tum laut jao,
Mujhe tum se muhabbat ho chali hai,
Bazaahir ek sukoon taari hai magar,
Dil main Qayamat ho chali hai,
Tumhary Naam se Phoolon k khilna,
Tumhara roz ka yun milna,
Tumhary Chand se chehray ko takna,
Meri aankhon ki aadat ho chali hai,
Abhi bhi waqt hai tum Laut jao,
Mujhe tum se muhabbat ho chali hai.

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Posted on June, 07 2012 11:10:03 PM

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yeah............. very nice poetry

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Posted on June, 09 2012 03:59:06 PM

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naveedanjumjavaid

Ap ki poetry loori dati hai ......ohhhh mujhe neend arhi hai

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Posted on June, 09 2012 04:30:27 PM

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nice poetry

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Posted on June, 09 2012 05:20:10 PM