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Asif007 Age: 37 4809 days old here Total Posts: 1118 Points : 415 Location: Hyderabad, Pakistan Status : Offline	Subject : Zauq-E-shairy tu gye dino me jo sath tha,mere qalb-o-jan ka sabaat tha ye bila'waja tera roothna,meri zindgi ko mita na dy tere samny mere hum'nafs,meri dharkano ki bisaat kya tera is trha mujhe dekhna,kaheen meri umr ghata na dy Like no likes.
	Posted on November, 29 2011 12:14:23 PM

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Asif007 said:
a121khan said:

ye 4 reply thay kal brightsky k...
ab ye btaao k 3 ghazals tmhari ginti me 3 se ziada hain. ek hi bat hai ya to tmhen ginti nahi aati ya phir points laine k liye be dhangey reply karne ki aadat ho gaii hai. koi bolta jo nahi.
sharam karo!!!
sharam ko aap apne paas rakhen .. bare jaahil insaan ho aap ... baat karne ka koi tareeqa e nahi hy ... agar posts n comments dekhen jayen to points ki fikar aap ko e ho sakti hy mjhe nahi awaz neche

KINDLY DONT USE HERE FOUL LANGUAGE'S HERE
ITS AN FORM
NOT PLATE FORM

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Posted on December, 16 2011 08:04:35 PM

Asif007 Age: 37 4809 days old here Total Posts: 1118 Points : 415 Location: Hyderabad, Pakistan Status : Offline	ji aap kon Like no likes.
	Posted on December, 16 2011 08:12:59 PM

owaisahmed55 Age: 36 5067 days old here Total Posts: 10102 Points : 122 Location: karachi, Pakistan Status : Offline	display pic k top per name written hai u can watch from there.... Like no likes.
	Posted on December, 16 2011 08:15:24 PM

Asif007 Age: 37 4809 days old here Total Posts: 1118 Points : 415 Location: Hyderabad, Pakistan Status : Offline	ha to uska kya Like no likes.
	Posted on December, 16 2011 08:22:03 PM

owaisahmed55 Age: 36 5067 days old here Total Posts: 10102 Points : 122 Location: karachi, Pakistan Status : Offline	i think you arn't on your sences dear kindly take rest Like no likes.
	Posted on December, 16 2011 08:23:37 PM

Asif007 Age: 37 4809 days old here Total Posts: 1118 Points : 415 Location: Hyderabad, Pakistan Status : Offline	mashware k lye shukrya... u must c urself Like no likes.
	Posted on December, 16 2011 08:31:43 PM

owaisahmed55 Age: 36 5067 days old here Total Posts: 10102 Points : 122 Location: karachi, Pakistan Status : Offline	baten to aap behki behki kar rahe ho rest bhe aap q nhe karlete Like no likes.
	Posted on December, 16 2011 08:44:08 PM

Asif007 Age: 37 4809 days old here Total Posts: 1118 Points : 415 Location: Hyderabad, Pakistan Status : Offline	i am relax here... r u ??? Like no likes.
	Posted on December, 16 2011 08:56:51 PM

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owaisahmed55 said:
Asif007 said:
a121khan said:

ye 4 reply thay kal brightsky k...
ab ye btaao k 3 ghazals tmhari ginti me 3 se ziada hain. ek hi bat hai ya to tmhen ginti nahi aati ya phir points laine k liye be dhangey reply karne ki aadat ho gaii hai. koi bolta jo nahi.
sharam karo!!!
sharam ko aap apne paas rakhen .. bare jaahil insaan ho aap ... baat karne ka koi tareeqa e nahi hy ... agar posts n comments dekhen jayen to points ki fikar aap ko e ho sakti hy mjhe nahi awaz neche
KINDLY DONT USE HERE FOUL LANGUAGE'S HERE
ITS AN FORM
NOT PLATE FORM

YAH ALL OF US KNOW THAT IT IS FORUM, SO DONT MAKE IT FISH MARKET!!
AND YOU SHOULD KNOW WHO IS USING ABUSING LANGUAGE. AUR KI KO BAT KARNEY KI TAMEEZ NAHI HAI???

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Posted on December, 17 2011 11:00:27 AM

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kitni majburiyan Ham palkon pe saja letay hain
Ham kahan rotay hain Halaat rola detay hain

yaad rehtay hain buray waqat k sath kis ko
subho hote hi log shama b bujha detay hain

sath hotay hain to lagta hai k sadiyon ka sath hai
Door hote hain to faqat do din mein bhula detay hain

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Posted on December, 17 2011 11:06:53 AM

brightsky2020 Age: 34 4818 days old here Total Posts: 1164 Points : 352 Location: Hassan Abdal, Pakistan Status : Offline	Jab chotay thay tab baray hone ki bari chahat thi par... ab pata chala k ,,Adhuray ehsas or tootay sapno se achay, Adhuray homework or tootay khilonay hain... Like no likes.
	Posted on December, 17 2011 11:07:24 AM

brightsky2020 Age: 34 4818 days old here Total Posts: 1164 Points : 352 Location: Hassan Abdal, Pakistan Status : Offline	Meri Khamoshi Bool Padi Mere Dil Ki Zuban Hokar Bataye Aasoun Ne Mere Aankh Se Rawana Hokar Sunaya Naa Dil Ka Haal Zuban Se Zamane Ke Darr Se Sunaya Ab Apna Haal-E-Dil Hum Bezuban Hokar Like no likes.
	Posted on December, 17 2011 11:08:38 AM

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Jab main ek chota sa larka tha
Raah me ek Najoomi ne mujh ko roka tha
Ghour se dekha tha us ne meri hatheli ko
Jesy boojhy koi kisi paheli ko
Kuch dair yunhi wo takta raha
Phir Aah bhari aur kahny laga
Ay Larkay! yeh jo teray hathon ki reikha hai
Is me main ne tera jeevan dekha hai
Ek pyari larki tere dil ko torry gi
Ek bhi sapna tere paas na chorray gi
Tu ro ro kr hath barhaay ga
Per chand tere hath na aye ga
Ay Larkay! yeh tu kia likhwa laya hai
Gham hi gham tere hissay me aya hai
Ek roz tujh pe aisa bhi Aana hai
Log kahen gay pagal hai deewana hai
Ghoomy ga tu sehra sehra Aas liay
Mar jaey ga Nadi kinary pyaas liaye
Gham ka itna lamba sath nahi dekha
Main ne ab tak aisa hath nahi dekha!!!

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Posted on December, 17 2011 03:04:30 PM

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Thank God Fight k Bad poetry to start hoi wrna topic kahan se kahan pohanch gaya tha.

Tujh Ko Chaha Bhi To Izhar Na Karna Aya
Kat Gye Umer Hamain Pya Na Karna Aya.

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Posted on December, 17 2011 03:53:02 PM

Tamoorraja

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Hina said:
Thank God Fight k Bad poetry to start hoi wrna topic kahan se kahan pohanch gaya tha.

Tujh Ko Chaha Bhi To Izhar Na Karna Aya
Kat Gye Umer Hamain Pya Na Karna Aya.

"Pyar" ka "r" missing ha correct it...

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Posted on December, 17 2011 03:58:18 PM

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pyar kabhi mukamal nhi hota adhora hi rehta hai isleye

pyar ka R missing hi rehny do [center][/center

or han meri mistakes mat dekho bhai ap thak jao gay mgr meri typing mistakeskhatam nhi hogi mera to kam hi yahi hai Mistakes karna i mean typo mistakes

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Posted on December, 17 2011 04:07:09 PM

Tamoorraja Age: 33 4757 days old here Total Posts: 252 Points : 128 Location: Muzaffargarh, Pakistan Status : Offline	It's mean you are a Serial Mistaker Like no likes.
	Posted on December, 17 2011 04:29:34 PM

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@Tamoor:
ab theek pehchany hona aap

Sath Dil K Chaly Dil Ko Nhi Roka Hum Nay
Jo Na Apna Tha Usy Toot K Chaha Hum Nay
Ak Dhokay May Kati Umer Hamari Sari
Kya Batain Kisay Paya Kisay Khoya Hum Nay

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Posted on December, 17 2011 04:34:58 PM

Tamoorraja Age: 33 4757 days old here Total Posts: 252 Points : 128 Location: Muzaffargarh, Pakistan Status : Offline	Bhool jaun Doston ko kaisi baat kartay ho Ghalib kya zindagi mumkin hai sanson k baghair.. Like no likes.
	Posted on December, 17 2011 05:53:37 PM

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thanks @bajjo @brightsky
ya lo full and final shair arz hai

Kholna Ghazab Howa Tere Zulf-e- Daraaz Kaa ...
Phaansi Gale Main Daal Kay Dunia Latak Gayee ...

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Posted on December, 17 2011 09:18:42 PM

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