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Hussainkhalid


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Subject : Mohsin vs Faraz vs khalid
Mohsin: Bikne Walay aur bhi hain
Ja Kar Khareed Lo MOHSIN
Hum Log Qeemat Se Nhin
Qismat Se Mila Karte Hain..
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Faraz Replied:
Agr Chahoon tou aik nigah
mein khareed loon us ko Faraz
Jis ko naaz hai bohat
k bikta nahi hoon main..!
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khalid hussain Replied: Bohat naaz hai tujko
teri is nigaah-e-ulfat par KHALID
Magar hum wo nahi pyare
Jo nigahen chaar karte hain..

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Posted on April, 21 2013 01:51:39 PM


Hussainkhalid


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Urtey hoye parindon ko qaid nahin ker saktay ''Faraz'' Jo apny hoty hain wo khud hi lot aaty hain.
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Mobisin replies to Faraz
Na rakh Umeed -E- wafa kisi parinday se '' MOHSIN'' Zara par kiya nikal ayen apna Aashiyana bhool jaty hain.
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Khalid replies to both. Parinday hawaon se wafa karty hain zameen se nahi ''Khalid'' Agar parindon se wafa chahiye to aasmaan main urna seekh.

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Posted on April, 21 2013 01:56:26 PM

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oye Coments plz k.c lagi meri poetry.

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Posted on April, 21 2013 04:22:53 PM

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Hussainkhalid said:

Mohsin: Bikne Walay aur bhi hain
Ja Kar Khareed Lo MOHSIN
Hum Log Qeemat Se Nhin
Qismat Se Mila Karte Hain..
.
. .
Faraz Replied:
Agr Chahoon tou aik nigah
mein khareed loon us ko Faraz
Jis ko naaz hai bohat
k bikta nahi hoon main..!
.
. .
khalid hussain Replied: Bohat naaz hai tujko
teri is nigaah-e-ulfat par KHALID
Magar hum wo nahi pyare
Jo nigahen chaar karte hain..

wo dekho wohi latky huey hen ishaq ki sooli pe zia,
jo kehty thy naaz se k ham ankhen chaar nahi krty.

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Posted on April, 25 2013 09:03:49 PM

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wah wah kya bat hai zia bhai ki

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Posted on April, 25 2013 09:12:24 PM

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ahho ji hmari kia hi bat he ji

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Posted on May, 05 2013 12:55:24 PM

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han bhai ap to chaa gy ho yahn pe.

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Posted on May, 05 2013 01:13:47 PM

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wah wah wah kya poetry hain Mohsin ki yarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr hahaha

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Posted on May, 09 2013 03:58:07 PM

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Yar 2 Poet to known hai ... 3rd one kon hai >??????

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Posted on May, 09 2013 04:29:07 PM

Hussainkhalid


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hahaha bs mohsin ki poetry pasnd aai

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Posted on May, 09 2013 04:34:35 PM

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mujhy Mohsin pasand hain to uski poetry to pasand ho ge na!!!!!!!

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Posted on May, 11 2013 09:43:48 AM

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mje apni bassssssssssss

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Posted on May, 11 2013 10:05:58 AM

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husain bhai app nay poetry kbohat sy topic bna dia hain
ap poetry ka just one topic bna sakty hu baki dell hu jain gay

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Posted on May, 11 2013 10:08:21 AM

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Acha phr thk hai bhai m ek hi topic m poetry post krunga.

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Posted on May, 11 2013 11:36:33 AM

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wese jo mene inbox wala topic bnaya tha usme post krunga

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Posted on May, 11 2013 11:38:14 AM

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poetry waly to topics boht hain but is ek m main apni poetry post krunga

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Posted on May, 11 2013 11:40:02 AM

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ha tek hain Hussain bhai idr apni poetry post kar liya kary

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Posted on May, 14 2013 04:50:33 PM

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ok bhai m idhar bi post krunga.

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Posted on May, 14 2013 04:53:57 PM

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g tek hain wesy ajj kal har koi poet hain

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Posted on May, 14 2013 04:54:52 PM

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Ueh wala msg main shyd pehle bhi phhar chuka hun. Shyed mujhe msg aya ho ga

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Posted on July, 28 2013 04:34:02 AM

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Is Qadar Musalsal Thee.n Shiddatain Judayi Ki
Aaj Pheli Baar Os Se Mein Ne Bewafaayi Ki

Warna Ab Talak Yun Tha Khwahishon Ki Barish Mein
Ya Tou Toot Kar Roya Ya Ghazal Saraayi Ki

Taj Dia Tha Kal Jin Ko Ham Ne Teri Chaahat Mein
Aaj Un Se Majbooran Taaza Aashnaayi Ki

Ho Chala Tha Jab Bhi Mujh Ko Ikhtilaaf Apnay Aap Se
TU Ne Kis Gharri Zaalim Meri Hamnawaayi Ki ?

Tark Kar Chukay Qaasid Ko-e-Na-Muraada.n Ko
Kon Ab Khabar Laaway Sheher-e-Aashnaayi Ki ?

Tanz-o-Taana-o-Tohmat Sab Hunar Hain Na Siha Ke
Aap Se Koi Poochay Ham Ne Kia Buraayi Ki ?

Phir Qafas Mein Shor Utha Qaidyon Ka Aur Sayyaad
Dekhna Urra De Ga Phir Khabar Rihaayi Ki

Dukh Howa Jab Os Dar Pe Kal “Faraz” Ko Dekha
Laakh Aib Thay Os Mein Khuu Na Thi Gadaayi Ki

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Posted on August, 30 2013 12:58:58 PM