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sweetangel


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Subject : Poetry
Wo Subha Thi Guzar Gai

Mein Shaam Tha Dhal Gaya

Wo Nazar Thi Jhuk Gai

Mein TehReeR Tha Mitt Gaya

Wo Shama Thi Pighal Gai

Mein Parwana Tha Jall Gaya

Wo AshQ Thi Beh Gai

Mein Dard Tha Seh Gaya

Wo Chand Thi Chup Gai

Mein Badal Tha Baras Gaya

Wo Tufan Thi Guzar Gai

Mein Gulshan Tha Bikhar Gaya

Wo Roh Thi Nikal Gai

Mein Jism Tha Khak Ban Gaya

Wo Khushbu Thi urr Gai

Mein Phool Tha Murjha Gaya

Buss..

Woh sab kuch thiii chali gayii..

Mein tanha tha or tanha reh gaya :-(

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Posted on October, 13 2011 06:13:10 PM


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Chale jaane do use kisi aur ki baaho mein
Jo itni chahat k baad mera na hua
Woh kisi aur ka kya ho ga.


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Posted on November, 12 2013 10:59:34 AM

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sweet brother all poetry is to much beautiful, its so lovely, same to you.

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Posted on November, 12 2013 11:09:48 AM

abdulhannan05


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poetry tou aisay hi howa karti hain an ayar

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Posted on November, 12 2013 06:59:47 PM

abdulhannan05


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poetry ki baat toouaisay hi keh di hai na yaar

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Posted on November, 13 2013 11:11:59 PM

abdulhannan05


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73 tu honay hi lagay hain mery comments hmmm

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Posted on November, 13 2013 11:14:23 PM

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aur kon si poetry karni hai aap nay yaar

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Posted on November, 13 2013 11:44:31 PM

abdulhannan05


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poetry tou aisi hi hoti thi kabhi hmmm

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Posted on November, 14 2013 09:45:02 AM

abdulhannan05


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poetry tu aisay hi honi chaiheye na yaar

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Posted on November, 14 2013 09:49:32 AM

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nice and zabardast poetry bhai ji ...hmmmm

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Posted on November, 14 2013 10:38:55 AM

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boht hi achi poetery hai ye thanks for sharing nice

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Posted on November, 14 2013 10:59:07 AM

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nice shareing pr mujhe zyada [pasand nahi ai hai normal ha

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Posted on November, 14 2013 11:12:54 AM

Hussainkhalid


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Q saim bhai apko ziada pasnd q nhe aai....zaika acha nhe h kia poetry m.

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Posted on November, 14 2013 11:23:42 AM

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hahahaha poetry to ashiq ki ghiza hai kun sahi kaha na saim bhai

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Posted on November, 14 2013 04:48:14 PM

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Gaya Wo Waqt Jab Teri Tamannao’n Ki Aadat Thi

Sitamgar Humny Andaaz-E-Tabiyat Hi Badal Dali

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Posted on November, 14 2013 07:21:17 PM

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rashid bhai ap ne abhi tak poetry kerni ni chori very nice poetry

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Posted on November, 14 2013 07:22:56 PM

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Mujhe bikharne na do mere muqaddar ki tarah
Ye teri zulf nahi jo pal bhar me sanwar jayegi

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Posted on November, 14 2013 07:27:02 PM

macher


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rashid bhai poetry main ap ka or zia bhai ka koi muqabla nahi ha yahan

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Posted on November, 14 2013 07:28:50 PM

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wah g kya bat hy apki

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Posted on November, 14 2013 07:31:02 PM

rashidfarooqz


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Mohabbat Hai K Nafrat Hai,Koi Itna Tou Samjhaye,
Kabhi Main Dil Se Larta Hon Kabhi Dil Mujh Se Larta Hai

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Posted on November, 14 2013 07:31:37 PM

macher


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rashid bhai lagta ha ap ne to shairy ki koi book khol rakhi ha

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Posted on November, 14 2013 07:32:36 PM