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abdullatif


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Subject : My Composed Little Poetry (Insaan)
Asslam o ALikum Friends

i have made little attempt.. that is in shape of my little poetry..

title is INSAAN
hope u will like it


Hotay hain har kism kay Insaan
Mazhabi Achay Sachay aur Haiwaan
kartay hain achay kaam Insaan
Laitay hain dusron ki Jaan Insaan

Hain Aik Adam ki Aulad Insaan
phir bhe aik dusray say Khafa hai Insaan

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Posted on April, 24 2011 03:07:31 PM


abdullatif


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I dont Know what are rules to compose poetry, this was just a little attemp to describe MAN

Poets have lake of words

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Posted on April, 24 2011 03:12:21 PM

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wow zaber dast yara...keep it up...

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Posted on April, 25 2011 08:30:13 AM

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abdullatif said:

Asslam o ALikum Friends

i have made little attempt.. that is in shape of my little poetry..

title is INSAAN
hope u will like it


Hotay hain har kism kay Insaan
Mazhabi Achay Sachay aur Haiwaan
kartay hain achay kaam Insaan
Laitay hain dusron ki Jaan Insaan

Hain Aik Adam ki Aulad Insaan
phir bhe aik dusray say Khafa hai Insaan

Nice Bro!

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Posted on April, 25 2011 11:14:28 AM

abdullatif


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thanx dear friends. .. . thanks alot

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Posted on April, 25 2011 01:54:52 PM

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VERY NICE....K33P !T XP
U LOOKIN LEXT FRAZ OV PAKISTAN

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Posted on April, 25 2011 05:59:41 PM

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owaisahmed55 said:

VERY NICE....K33P !T XP
U LOOKIN LEXT FRAZ OV PAKISTAN

Bt Wo Qadyani Tha!

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Posted on April, 25 2011 06:29:23 PM

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wow intresting i like it mjhe ye both pasand aya ha

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Posted on April, 17 2013 08:08:15 AM

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nice yar, keep it up isay complete kar lo yeh buhat achi poetry ban jaye gi.

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Posted on April, 17 2013 10:17:31 AM

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nic bro n gud...


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Posted on April, 17 2013 10:18:14 AM

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wah wah kia kehny,,
mehfil loot li zalim

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Posted on April, 17 2013 10:44:14 AM

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mehfil kya bhai mehfilein loot li hain is bhai ne to.

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Posted on April, 17 2013 11:40:19 AM

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