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Subject : koshish...
gar koshish karon to mil he ja'ay ga
magar kon tumhari trhan mujy chahay ga

tumhain zaror koi chahton se daikhay ga
magar woh aankhain myre kahan se la'ay ga

tumharay sath yeh mosam gulabon sa hai
tumharay baad yeh mosam bohat rolain gy

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Posted on July, 01 2013 11:32:27 PM


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Nice poetry.

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Posted on July, 02 2013 02:30:40 AM

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nice poetry . but apni id please change ker lain.

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Posted on July, 02 2013 01:16:06 PM

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wah wah wah irshad irshad


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Posted on July, 02 2013 01:20:41 PM

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Poert ki kya hi bat hai.

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Posted on July, 02 2013 03:56:33 PM

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Koshish ... kya poetry hai.

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Posted on July, 02 2013 07:34:54 PM

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Gazal hai yar koshish.

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Posted on July, 02 2013 10:13:51 PM

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thanks sab ka

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Posted on July, 03 2013 12:49:05 AM

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Welcome ap ko bht bht

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Posted on July, 03 2013 08:51:24 AM

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Yar kahan se copy paste ki hai y gazal.

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Posted on July, 03 2013 05:46:32 PM

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copy paste nahi kia hai

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Posted on July, 04 2013 12:14:27 AM

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Saadi khud bnai h kya phr ye poetry

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Posted on July, 04 2013 03:17:14 AM

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buhat achi poetry hai

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Posted on July, 04 2013 11:48:43 AM

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milne ki tum koshish kerna wada kabhi na kerna......

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Posted on July, 04 2013 01:43:36 PM

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wada to tot jata hai.

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Posted on July, 04 2013 02:03:53 PM

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kesa song sunaia bhai

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Posted on July, 04 2013 02:14:28 PM

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riabest said:

Saadi khud bnai h kya phr ye poetry

nai yeh myre kud ke nahi hai.ek novel mein perhi the bohat saal pehlay.achi lagi to tab se mind mein hai

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Posted on July, 04 2013 11:47:30 PM

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yahan kisi ka bhi kuch nahi hai

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Posted on July, 05 2013 02:07:32 PM

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Be-Khudi Be-Sabab Nahi’n ‘Ghalib’,
Kuchh To Hai Jis Ki Parda-Daari Hai…

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