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Subject : tam'na
tam'na deed ki musa kre or toor jal jae

aajab dastur.e.ulfat h kre koi bhre koi

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Posted on February, 03 2013 12:15:23 PM


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chupany pe aaon to khushboo bhi chupa lon taza gulon se
jo dhondny pe aaon to 'zia' aks e hawa dhond leta hon

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Posted on February, 04 2013 08:14:37 PM

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Posted on February, 04 2013 08:20:22 PM

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Wohi Ishq Jo Tha Kabhi Junoo.n Se Rozgaar Bana Dia
Kaheen Zakham Baich Ke Aa Gaye Kaheen Shair Koi Suna Dia

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Posted on February, 05 2013 03:08:22 PM

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HUM DOUR HI SAY KAR LAITY HN SANAM KA DEEDAR
MUSAA KI TERHA TOOR PAY JAYA NHI KARTY.........!

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Posted on February, 07 2013 07:01:04 PM

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wah wah razi nice shair h

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Posted on February, 07 2013 08:40:04 PM

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thank u so much......

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Posted on February, 07 2013 08:47:46 PM

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zia bht achi gazal h apki

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Posted on March, 11 2013 07:32:47 AM

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PUCHTA HA JAB KOI K DUNIYA ME MUHABBAT HAI KHA.........

MUSKARA DAITA HU ME OR YAD A JATI HAI "MAA"......

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Posted on March, 11 2013 10:21:55 AM

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very nice.

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Posted on March, 14 2013 12:14:33 AM

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Hai Aashaqi Me Rasm Alag Sab Se Bethna,
But Khana Bhi, Haram Bhi, Kaleesa Bhi Chor
Day...
Soda_Gari Nahi Yeh iBadat Khuda Ki Hai,
Aye Be_Khabar! Jaza Ki Tamanna Bhi Chor Day...

Allama iqbal

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Posted on November, 28 2013 11:26:30 PM

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this is very nice potery. i have never read it before.

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Posted on November, 29 2013 10:45:45 AM

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very nice poetry ..keep it up......

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Posted on November, 29 2013 08:01:23 PM

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Hona tha Humein kun juda?
Door ho rahe hain, Khud se keh rahe hain,
Mil rahi Humein kun saza?
MILTI HY JUDAI KUN AISI?
JISE BHI PIYAAR HUM KAREIN,
MILTI HY SAZA KUN AISI?
JIS SE BHI WAFAA HUM KAREIN

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Posted on January, 09 2014 02:23:51 AM

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chalo koi bat nahi shabab bahi . chalta rehta hai
ap bhi apne inbox se koi msg upload ker do

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Posted on January, 10 2014 01:43:47 AM

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Ye Chubhan Akaile pan ki
Ye lagan udas Shab se,
Main hawa se larr raha hoon
Tujhe kya bataun kab se,,

Ye sehr ki Sazishen theen,
K ye inteqaam-e-shab tha,

Mujhe zindagi ka sooraj
Na bacha saka Ghazab se,

Tere naam se shafa ho!
Koi zakham wo ataa kar,

Mere nama-bar! Mile to,
Usy kehna ye adab se,

Wo jawaan ruton ki shaamein,
Kahan kho gai hain ,,,!


Main to bujh k Reh gaya hon
Wo bichar gaya hai jab se

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Posted on January, 10 2014 01:45:11 AM

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Ek Jhoot Meine Tumse Kaha..
Mujhe Nafrat Hai Tumse..

Ek Jhoot Tum Bhi Keh Do..

Tumhe Mohabbat Hai Mujh Se

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Posted on January, 10 2014 01:46:14 AM

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Teri Qurbat Bhi Nahi hai Mayassar, .
Aur Din Baarisho'n K chl Rahey Hain

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Posted on January, 10 2014 01:47:29 AM

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Wo kia ajeeb shakhs tha k jis ki zaat Pr....!
Jab Aitbar barh Gaya t0 Ikhtiar Na Raha.

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Posted on January, 10 2014 01:48:34 AM

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Jesy nangy paaon
Phatty purany kaprron waly bchy

Apni khali jebon ka ehsas liye

Dil ko achi lgny wali mehngi cheezen


Kisi dukan k bnd sheeshon sy

Pehron lag kr takty hain na

Main b tum ko yunhi Mohsin

Aksr takta rehta hon

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Posted on January, 10 2014 01:49:37 AM

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Nothing is perfect in this world So one should target excellence, not perfection..
Do only one thing at a time and do it in the shortest possible time without the loss of quality

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Posted on January, 10 2014 01:52:44 AM