Forums > General Talks > PAL PAL GUZARTA JAEE (Poetry)
  • Page 1 of 1
  • 1
abubakar


Age: 34 Male
5042 days old here
Total Posts: 1224
Points : 264

Location:
wah cantt, Pakistan

Status : Offline
Subject : PAL PAL GUZARTA JAEE (Poetry)
Betaab ho udhar tum
Bechain hain edhar ham
Pal pal guzarta jaee
Nadaniyoon ka mousam
Tum samne ho phir bhi
Dil ka ajab hai aalam
Sansoon k sur hain bojhal
Dharkan ki laye hai madham
Dhire se muskara do
Yeh bekali to ho kam
Ban kar hawa ka jhonka
Zulfoon ko choom leta
Ek sur nai faza main bujhta
Aey kaash koi dekhe
Yeh bebasi ka aalam

no likes.

Posted on March, 08 2011 10:04:36 AM


Afzal


Age: 32 Male
5054 days old here
Total Posts: 2745
Points : 9

Location:
Mirpur khas, Pakistan

Status : Offline
Nice

no likes.

Posted on March, 12 2011 12:56:39 AM

tahirkk


Age: 34 Male
5036 days old here
Total Posts: 981
Points : 14

Location:
lahore, Pakistan

Status : Offline
good

no likes.

Posted on March, 12 2011 01:05:05 AM

horrible


Age: 33 Male
5031 days old here
Total Posts: 613
Points : 4

Location:
lahore, Pakistan

Status : Offline
nice

no likes.

Posted on March, 15 2011 02:49:01 PM

atif03


Age: 47 Male
5037 days old here
Total Posts: 7660
Points : 828

Location:
Islamabad, Pakistan

Status : Offline
good

no likes.

Posted on March, 15 2011 02:50:22 PM

horrible


Age: 33 Male
5031 days old here
Total Posts: 613
Points : 4

Location:
lahore, Pakistan

Status : Offline
nice

no likes.

Posted on March, 16 2011 05:05:12 PM

atif03


Age: 47 Male
5037 days old here
Total Posts: 7660
Points : 828

Location:
Islamabad, Pakistan

Status : Offline
palo ka kia hay un ko guzar jaana hota hain

no likes.

Posted on March, 16 2011 05:06:48 PM

owaisahmed55


Age: 36 Male
5066 days old here
Total Posts: 10102
Points : 122

Location:
karachi, Pakistan

Status : Offline
ya kahan kahan se la k chiipka rahe ho @abubakar

no likes.

Posted on March, 16 2011 06:48:50 PM

ozair


Age: 36 Male
5040 days old here
Total Posts: 3306
Points : 245

Location:
peshawar, Pakistan

Status : Offline
owaisahmed55 said:

ya kahan kahan se la k chiipka rahe ho @abubakar

hahahah bhai google zindaabd.

no likes.

Posted on March, 16 2011 06:49:47 PM

kashee


Age: 39 Male
5061 days old here
Total Posts: 2121
Points : 163

Location:
Peshawar, Pakistan

Status : Offline
nice

no likes.

Posted on March, 18 2011 02:05:20 AM

ravians


Age: 33 Male
5035 days old here
Total Posts: 941
Points : 123

Location:
lahore, Pakistan

Status : Offline
nice poetry

no likes.

Posted on March, 18 2011 02:07:17 AM

Sabirshah


Age: 34 Male
4070 days old here
Total Posts: 15423
Points : 83

Location:
Islamabad, Pakistan

Status : Offline
Bhai jan bus waqt to rukta nai hai na ye to chalta yahni guzrta jata hai kahen nai rukta hai gahain na .

no likes.

Posted on April, 13 2014 10:38:02 AM

Punjabian


Age: 34 Male
4038 days old here
Total Posts: 1587
Points : 31

Location:
Faisalabad, Pakistan

Status : Offline
yr aj kl wese tkreebn hr bnda hi poetry krne laga hai kia masla hai sab ke sath

no likes.

Posted on April, 13 2014 11:15:42 AM

Awais148


Age: 30 Male
4307 days old here
Total Posts: 12184
Points : 198

Location:
Attock, Pakistan

Status : Offline
keh raha hai dil dewana jane jana kha ke qasam
......................................ham tujh pe mer jain ge pata bhi na chale

no likes.

Posted on April, 13 2014 06:11:21 PM

Sabirshah


Age: 34 Male
4070 days old here
Total Posts: 15423
Points : 83

Location:
Islamabad, Pakistan

Status : Offline
Bhai jan mujhe to ap ki poetry kafi pasnd aai hai ap aur bi kuch post karen ge to behter ho jae ga na...

no likes.

Posted on April, 16 2014 12:58:07 PM

Awais148


Age: 30 Male
4307 days old here
Total Posts: 12184
Points : 198

Location:
Attock, Pakistan

Status : Offline
hawa keh rahi hai ghata keh rahi hai haseen ye nazara hai
................................................... Muhabbat ne muhaabat ko muhabbat se pukara hai

no likes.

Posted on April, 17 2014 12:23:27 PM

Sabirshah


Age: 34 Male
4070 days old here
Total Posts: 15423
Points : 83

Location:
Islamabad, Pakistan

Status : Offline
Bhai jan ye to sahairy kafi behter hai mujhe to pata nai ye kun se poet ki hai agr ap ko pta hai to btao.

no likes.

Posted on April, 26 2014 09:01:36 PM

  • Page 1 of 1
  • 1