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072007


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Subject : its ma own peotry...
Aey Xindagi tu mohabbat ko q laya...
dekho to mera kya haal banaya...
janta hun es k bina jeena jeena ni...
magar saat mein tu tanhai ko q laya...
dil se to wo pas hai mere...
magar khuda hame os se boht dur laya...
aey xindagi tu kch b kare kch b kahe magar...
khuda ne ose mere liye hi banaya...

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Posted on July, 01 2012 10:07:42 AM


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wah g wah

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Posted on July, 01 2012 11:29:45 AM

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really yeh apke apni shairi hai????????????

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Posted on July, 01 2012 11:30:17 AM

072007


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han masif...its ma own poetry...

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Posted on July, 02 2012 10:05:44 AM

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Nice Poetry

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Posted on July, 02 2012 11:02:02 AM

072007


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thnx hina...

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Posted on July, 04 2012 11:49:42 AM

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waiting for more nice poetry by you

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Posted on July, 04 2012 12:13:52 PM

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where is more poetry ??

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Posted on July, 04 2012 12:37:23 PM

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Omer:
072007 abhi likh raha hai poetry

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Posted on July, 04 2012 12:45:02 PM

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HMM TU OR KIA SOCHNY MAY POTRY KO TIME TU LAGTA HAY NA

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Posted on July, 04 2012 12:47:16 PM

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han jee aisy hi koi Shair nhi ban jata hai

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Posted on July, 04 2012 12:48:49 PM

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hmm bara mushkil sa kaam hay shair banana or i think usss say bhee mushkil sunana

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Posted on July, 04 2012 12:50:02 PM

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Atif:
Sabse Mushkil Kam To sunna Hai

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Posted on July, 04 2012 12:56:11 PM

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Hina said:

Omer:
072007 abhi likh raha hai poetry

Hina

itni kam raftar hoy ge
to phir to 10 saal bad he book print hoge is ke

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Posted on July, 04 2012 01:06:43 PM

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ha ha nahy nahy omer bahi ho sakta hay wakt kay sath sath raftar barh jaay

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Posted on July, 04 2012 01:07:59 PM

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atif03 said:

ha ha nahy nahy omer bahi ho sakta hay wakt kay sath sath raftar barh jaay

Atif Bhai

us k liyea in ko speed barhani pery ge

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Posted on July, 04 2012 01:15:44 PM

072007


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0mer87...dude,mere pas itna tym ni hota na jbi thora tym lagta hai...
em an engineering student...so jab free hota hun,tab poetry krta hun...


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Posted on July, 04 2012 08:29:25 PM

072007


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Atif bhai...don't worry yar itna tym ni lagega!
poetry ki b00k likhna koi asan kaam ni...tym lagta hai...
es k liye sab kuch chorna parta hai...


Hina...ok i'll post very s00n...

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Posted on July, 04 2012 08:30:59 PM

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acha..............
good good
very good

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Posted on July, 04 2012 09:37:45 PM

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very nice writng good words budy.

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Posted on July, 06 2012 09:20:49 PM

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lagta hai poetry raaste mn hai
aa rhi hai.....ajkal traffic jam hota hai na
time to lag jata hai

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Posted on July, 07 2012 11:12:52 AM