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Awais148


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Posted on September, 03 2013 10:21:31 AM


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ye poetry ou bohut hiachi hai jnab jee hmmm

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Posted on September, 09 2013 10:02:49 PM

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thank you abdul hannan bhai mujhe bhi ye poetry pasand ai thi is liye post ki hai

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Posted on September, 10 2013 09:26:28 AM

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Very nice and heart touching poetry mujhe to ache lagi..

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Posted on September, 10 2013 03:26:08 PM

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boht hi aci poetry hai bhai ye bhi poochne ki bat hai

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Posted on September, 10 2013 07:55:46 PM

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nice poetr sharing with us thanks for it

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Posted on September, 10 2013 09:13:13 PM

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Mujhe toh yeh poetry bhut he ache lagi he zbardast awesome keep it up..

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Posted on September, 19 2013 11:51:31 PM

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Mohabbat karne waley kam na hon ga,
Teri mehfil mein lekin hum na hon ge..

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Posted on September, 20 2013 08:29:07 AM

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Jaanum teray baghair kab zinda raha hoon main,
Her peher her gharri yahan merta raha hoon main,
Dukh zindagi ko ghayal kertay rehay meri,
Ik kerb-e-musalsal se guzerta raha hoon main,
Jo log apni jan se aziz thhay mujhay,
Un ke wafa ko akser tarasta raha hoon main,
Bikhray jalay muqaam milay safer-e-hayat main,
Daaman ko apnay raakh se bharta raha hoon main,
Teri yaad ne bhi likh dee muqader main baykali,
Qismat ke iss khail pe hunsta raha hoon main,
Hain aashnaa yahan meray dardon ke qaaflay,
Bus inn ke dermiyan he chalta raha hoon main,
Rakhta hon her qadam main ab phoonk phoonk ker,
Apnay he saaye se bhi darta raha hoon main,
Aaj hoon main us jagah jahan manzil nahi Shaukat,
Raston se bewaja he larrta raha hoon main..

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Posted on September, 20 2013 08:32:39 AM

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Adal o insaf faqat hashr pr mokoof nahi,
Zindagi khud bhi gunahon ki saza deti he…

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Posted on September, 20 2013 08:35:23 AM

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Kabhi neendain kabhi ankhon may paani bhej dyta hai,
wo khud aata nahi apni nashaani bhej dyta hai …

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Posted on September, 20 2013 08:37:32 AM

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Sham sy pehlay ik diya jalana chahta hon ,
Main aj apni mohabat ko aazmana chahta hon ,
Yeh aana parast log hai andr sy tootay huye ,
Main yeh baat duniya walon ko btana chahta hon ,
Teri zaat ki mehroomiyan tera man ki yeh udaasiyan ,
Mujhy moka to dy main inhay mitaana chahta hon ,
Tere hath mera rehbar tere naksh paa meri manzil k
Tujhay main chillchilate dhoop main aanchal bnana chahta hon ,
cheen lo saharay mujh sy apnay piyaaray saray mujh sy
Bs do hosla mujhay main khud ko manvana chahta hon ,
poocha jo yaaro nay muskurahat ka sbab
to kehnay lga awais main hansi k pardy main dard apna chupana chahta hoon….

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Posted on September, 20 2013 08:39:50 AM

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Meri Ankhon se kabhi utro dil mein,
Ke main dharkan mein Basa lon tumko,
Jaan se b barh kr chahun tumhen,
Apni zindgi hi Bana lon tumko,
Mere khuwabon mein Sirf tum hi baso,
Apni Neendon mein saja lon tumko ,
Logon ki bheer mein
kho na jana kahin,
Zamane se hi main
chura lon tum ko…

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Posted on September, 20 2013 08:42:34 AM

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Ek ajnbi se mujhe itna pyaar kyon hai ,
lnkar karne par chahat ka ikraar kyon hai ,
Use pana nahi meri taqdeer mein shayed ,
Phir har mor pe usi ka intezar kyon hai …

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Posted on September, 20 2013 08:44:20 AM

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acha jin ka naseeb nahi hota, unko kya milta hai abdullah bhai.

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Posted on September, 20 2013 09:53:04 AM

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some words in the pictures are not very much visible to read

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Posted on September, 20 2013 09:57:36 AM

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real main buhat hi heart touching poetry hai, mujhe asi poetry read kerna acha lagta hai.

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Posted on September, 20 2013 10:14:39 AM

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bhut he ache aur zbardast he dil jeey liya yaara ,,

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Posted on September, 20 2013 03:32:49 PM

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han Awais yar image size bohat chota hai

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Posted on September, 20 2013 04:16:18 PM

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kafi nice poetry hai aap ki taraf say hmmm

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Posted on September, 21 2013 02:38:57 PM

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poetry k baray main rae tou di hi hai na

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Posted on September, 22 2013 07:00:11 PM