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Awais148


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kaisi lagi ghazal reply must plzzz

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Posted on September, 03 2013 10:20:24 AM


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awais bhai apne poetry per bhi itne topics bna dale hain.
ager hum itne topics bnate yo hsmare topics close ho jane the.
spke abhi tak kiun nho hue.

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Posted on February, 20 2014 02:23:00 PM

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Wo raat Dard aur sitam ki raat hogi,

Jis raat ruksat un ki Baraat hogi.

Uth jatay hain ye soch kar neend se k,

Kisi ghair ki baahon me Meri jan hogi.

Hosh nahi tha mujhe Us ki shaadi ki raat.

Main ne kabhi ye na Socha tha k meri zindagi Nelaam hogi.

Meri jan ab zinda hon Teri khatir.

Kal shehar me tere kafan Me lipti meri lash hogi.

Tum dekh kar khoon k Ansoo ro gi.

Youn khoon se bhari Meri lash hogi.

Qayamat hi qayamt hogi Tere shehar me,

K har gali har ghar me Likhi meri dukh bhari Daastaan hogi

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Posted on February, 22 2014 09:47:01 AM

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wah wah mazhar bhai kiya ghazal pesh ki hay apny i love this ghazal .......mjhe ghazals pasnd hain....!!!

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Posted on February, 22 2014 10:37:21 AM

hearthackervsgirls


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mazher bhai wake hi buhat achi gazal hai.
mujhe wake hi buhat passand hai apki yeh wali gazal.
or tareef karoun ya bus itni hi kafi hai.

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Posted on February, 22 2014 01:27:33 PM

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Kitni Tehzeeb Sy Khara Hein Woh Nigahoon Ko Jhuka Kar . . .

Lagta Hai Mohabbat Ny Usy Bhi Sanjeeda Kar Diya . .

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Posted on February, 22 2014 03:35:50 PM

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Bari achi poetry hai, mujhe kafi pasand aai hai mazhar bhai ki tarah awais bhai ap bi poet ban jau tu behter hai

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Posted on February, 22 2014 06:45:43 PM

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awais bhai ap to poetry wale topic bna ker gum sum ho jate ho.
ap online ho ker apne topics ko update ker dia karo.........

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Posted on February, 22 2014 07:53:28 PM

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Tanweer bhai ap theak keh rahe ho mujhe bi yahi lagta hai k kia pata hai ya bhai jan kia kehte ho na.

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Posted on March, 13 2014 07:35:12 PM

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Bhai jan kuch achi achi gazalen share kia karu kiun k mujhe bi poetqry pasad hai na awais bhai ap poet ho.

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Posted on March, 13 2014 07:36:25 PM

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achi ghazal hai very nice bahot achy.............................................

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Posted on April, 18 2014 09:45:40 AM

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Nice...!!

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Posted on March, 04 2015 01:33:56 PM