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Subject : Hamen to Saath ChaLna Tha..!!
Hamen to Saath ChaLna Tha..!!

Hamen to Saath Rehna thha..

Tumhen aik Ghar banana thha.

Mujhe jis ko Sajana thha..

Sunehri JaaLion se Lag k' Tera Intezaar Karna thha..

Agar Tum der sey Aatey to..

Mujhe ko Rooth Jana thha..

Tumhen Mujh ko Manana thha..

PaharoN per PighaLti Baraf ki manand...

Mujhe Dheerey se Hansna thha..

Bohat si Un Kahi Baaton ko..

Hum ne Lufz deney thay..

Kabhi Barish k Mosom mein..arang Sun k..

Kaye Nazmen tumhen apni..

Mujh se Mansoob karna theen..

Abhi to tum ne mujh ko..

Baansri k Sur sikhaaney they..

Hamen to Saath ChaLna Thha..!!?

Hamen to Saath Rehna thha..

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Posted on May, 04 2013 10:00:33 PM


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nice poetry

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Posted on May, 05 2013 12:20:48 AM

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boring...

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Posted on May, 05 2013 12:22:52 AM

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ustadg bhai apko sb poetry boring qyun lgti hai?

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Posted on May, 05 2013 12:42:51 AM

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hussain khalid tum poetry section men kia kr rhy ho?

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Posted on May, 05 2013 12:53:37 PM

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hehe qyun bhai poetry section m ana mana hy kya?

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Posted on May, 05 2013 01:20:03 PM

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ustaadg said:

boring...

kya boring ha

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Posted on May, 07 2013 09:29:27 AM

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wah wah wah kya ghazal hain wesy coment ky baad he parunga abi tak para nahi hain lolz

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Posted on May, 08 2013 10:16:09 PM

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veryyyy nice ghazal farha veryy goooood

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Posted on May, 08 2013 11:09:05 PM

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ab parha buht alaaa ghazal g very good

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Posted on May, 09 2013 03:49:42 PM

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waaah kya ghazal hay kiaaa baaaat hy sch pucho to mene bi abi prha hy hahaha

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Posted on May, 09 2013 04:32:11 PM

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farhanFB said:

veryyyy nice ghazal farha veryy goooood

jabir1 said:

ab parha buht alaaa ghazal g very good

thanks

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Posted on May, 19 2013 08:52:58 PM

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Posted on May, 30 2013 06:52:56 PM

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jis nay pahlay suni hoi hai us k liay boring or baaqi kuch k liayy new....

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Posted on May, 30 2013 08:23:24 PM

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