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Kiranrizwi


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Subject : Bheer mein aik ajnabi ka saamna acha laga
Bheer mein aik ajnabi ka saamna acha laga

sab se chhup kar woh kissi ka dekhna acha laga

Surmai Aankhon ke neechey phool se khilney lagey

kehtey kehtey kuch kissi ka sochna acha laga

baat tou kuch bhi nahin thi laiken "uss" ka aik dum

haath ko honton pe rakh kar rokna acha laga

Chaa'ey mein cheeni milaana uss ghari bhaaya buhut

zair - e lab woh muskuraata "shukria" acha laga

Dil mein kitney aehed baandhey thay bhulaaney ke ussey

woh mila tou sab iraadey torna acha laga

Uss udoo - e - jaan ko amjad bura kaisey kahoon

jab bhi Aaya saamney woh be-wafa acha laga

"2 Ajnabi dost"

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Posted on November, 06 2012 10:29:02 AM


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?**Mere Lafzoon Ki Mehak Agar Uss Tak Pohanch Jay Too Kehna

!!...Hum Jesy Log Agar Kho Jayn To Dubara Qismat Say Bhi Nahi Miltay...** :P :'(

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Posted on November, 06 2012 10:48:13 AM

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Are you hungry?
Never mind I have two bowls,
1 for wishes and
1 for luck.
Wishes are mine and
luck is yours.
you can take it or leave it,
choice is yours.

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Posted on November, 08 2012 04:28:11 PM

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Log samajhte hain humne unko bhula rakha hai,
wo kya jane ki dil me chupa rakha hai,
dekhe na koi usay meri aankho mein,
isliye palkon ko hum nay jhuka rakha hai,..

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Posted on November, 08 2012 05:30:43 PM

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‘What is MOHABBAT
MOHABBAT IS
M, mot.
O, oljhan.
H, harna.
A, aansu.
B, bewafai.
B, barbadi.
A, andhera.
T, tanhai.
SO friendship is always better than love?

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Posted on November, 09 2012 09:26:17 AM

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Wo zindagi ho k dunia faraz kia kijiye,
K jis se ishq kro be wafa nikalti hai,,

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Posted on November, 09 2012 02:13:52 PM

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Driven by constant hope
We live each moment of our life
We are taught to dig out the scope
And never to let ourselves down with strife.
We believe it going to get better
We feel that fate can nvr be that cruel
But then at the end of the day?s clutter
We realise it was nothing but a cold, messy gruel
Like the generations before us
We were deceived
It was like a bus we never caught
Something denied after an ever-lasting wait
When u turn to the last page of likfe
You realise there was nothing miraculous in there
It was a long drama of misery
With intermissions of happiness?
-a dejected soul
pls pen down ur comments guys


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Posted on November, 09 2012 03:09:36 PM

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Gumsum hua awaaz ka darya tha jo ik shakhss,
Pathar bhi nahin ab woh sitaara tha jo ik shakhss..


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Posted on November, 16 2012 12:19:07 PM

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Akhiyan Wich Wass Panway Dil Wich Reh Way,
Pyar Naalo Wad Channa Hore Keyri Shay Way

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Posted on November, 16 2012 03:14:43 PM

Tayyab96


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Likh kar hamara naam zameen par mitta diya,
Un ka tha khail khaak main hum ko milaa diya..

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Posted on November, 17 2012 05:44:15 PM

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Sher kehna nahin asaan ghazal ka Nasir,
Ishq jab shola’nawaa ho to ghazal hoti hai

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Posted on February, 05 2013 01:20:07 AM

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