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Subject : aaj kal konsa poet acha he apki nazar men?
pehly aap log btao,
main bad men btaon ga

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Posted on September, 23 2012 05:22:22 AM


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waqt-e khizaan qareeb hai ab ja unhi k pas....

jin zaalimon nay looty tery din bahaar k....

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Posted on October, 11 2012 12:14:17 PM

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Zawaal Ye Hai K Tera Sath Nahi,

Kamaal Ye Hai K Jee Rahay Hain....


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Posted on October, 11 2012 12:18:39 PM

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Mujhe Hukum Howa Kuch Aur Mang Us Ke Siwa,

Me Dast-e-Dua se Uth Gaye Ke Dua Kuch B Ni Us Ke Siwa..

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Posted on October, 11 2012 05:40:22 PM

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Thats vry bad,
topic kya hai aur reply kiya hai?
Admin pls close this.

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Posted on October, 11 2012 06:48:35 PM

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Azaab-e-Hijr Bhi Dekha
Tha Kamaal-e-Wisl Bhi Dekha..

Mujhe Laga Hai Koi
Teesra Bhi Aalam Hai ..!!

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Posted on October, 12 2012 09:44:06 AM

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Har Koi Pochta He Karte Kya Ho Tum,
Goya K Jese mohabbat Koi Kaam Hi Nhi..!!?
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Posted on October, 12 2012 10:55:57 AM

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pyar se bhi zrori kai kam hen
pyar sab kuch nahi zindgi k liey

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Posted on October, 13 2012 05:07:32 AM

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Mat karo behas haar jao gy,,
Husn itni bari daleel nahi…..


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Posted on October, 13 2012 09:24:08 AM

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Ek tum hi the jiske damm par chalti thi sanse meri...!!
Laot aao ke zindagi se wafa nibhai nahi jati...!!

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Posted on October, 16 2012 12:08:49 PM

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Rok detey hein shariat k takazey
warna
Mei tera ziqer sab se afzal kar don

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Posted on October, 16 2012 04:08:37 PM

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"Tere Dard Ka Dil-E-Naatwan,
Main Elaj Krun To Kia Krun.....

Na Tabeeb Hun K Dawa Krun,
Na Fakeer Hun K Dua Krun...!!

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Posted on October, 17 2012 11:41:38 AM

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”Nazuk” Mizaj Hain wo itna k kuch na puchiye
“suna” hai unhay neend nahi ati apni dharkano’n k shor se.

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Posted on October, 20 2012 12:05:50 PM

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Mera khawab thaa mera hamsafar ..
Wo bhi sath merey na chal saka..

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Posted on October, 22 2012 11:42:45 AM

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kro muhabbat aghr insaan sy to lazm hy dhoka hi mily ga
lagao dill jo khuda ki bndagi mae to kuch to sillah milay ga

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Posted on October, 23 2012 02:38:05 PM

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kese mujey tum mil gai...
Kismat pe aye na yaqeen

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Posted on October, 24 2012 08:43:08 AM

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Us ki aankhon ki surkhiyan de rahi hain pata,
Ke raat us ne bhi jaag ke guzaari thi,
Bistar ki silwatain bhi sunaa rahi hain daastan,
Ke hijar ki pehli raat us pe kis qadar bhaari thi,
Ab kaun karta hoga tere lab-o-rukhsaar ki tareef,
Hamare baad uljhi huyi zulf kis ne sanwaari thi,
Tu ne apna samajh ke ik baar maangi to hoti,
Jaan ki qasam, kya jaan humain jaan se pyar thi?
Daryaa ke do kinaron ki tarah sath chale per mil na sake,
Kuch woh bhi tha ana’aa parasst, kuch baghiyaana soch hamari thi,
Manzil to door na thi magar hausley qaayem na reh sake Waqas,
Kahin main thak gaya, kahin us ne himmat haari thi..

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Posted on November, 06 2012 09:44:03 PM

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Aaj jo tujhse chhoota to kuch yaad aaya,
Main kaun hoon, kiska hoon sarmaaya,
Kisi ki khwahish me yoon magan tha,
Ki bhool gaya, wo apna hai ya paraya,
Wo to bhool bhi gaya un baaton ko kab ka,
Ke kisne usey chaha tha jab sabne thukraya,
Meri deewangi ka aalam mat poochh Amir,
Jise toot kar chaha usi ne qatal karaya..

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Posted on November, 06 2012 09:45:05 PM

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Zar ki namoos ki rasmon se baghaawat kar ke,
Kuch nahin paaye ga woh mujh se mohabbat kar ke,
Baiy’n karti huyi aankhain, yeh pareshan zulfain,
Aur kya chahte ho us se mohabbat kar ke,
Phool to phool hain zakhmon ke bhi nakhre hain yahan,
Hum ne dekha hai bohat in ki ibadat kar ke,
Yeh kisi jabr pe honton ko siyaa karte hain,
Zulam karte hain woh zaalim ki himayat kar ke,
Dil ke sehraao’n ki veeraaniya’n jati hi nahin,
Teri yaadon ne bhi dekha yahan hijrat kar ke,
Woh mere hijr ko bhi khail samajhta hai Wasi,
Laut jaye ga kisi roz sharaarat kar ke..

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Posted on November, 06 2012 09:46:11 PM

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Samar naseeb main ho ga to mil hi jai ga,
jo shaakh phoot rahi hy os ko phalny do.,,

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Posted on November, 06 2012 10:16:10 PM

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meray kamray main baitho
or har ek shay ko dekho
book shelf main pari hoye
kitabain or dairiyan
maiz par rakhi hoye tasveerain
or guldaan main murjhaye hoye phool
tumhain batain gay
draaz main mojood cassetes
deewaron par lagay cards
tum par ayan karain gay
kay kessay meray armaano'n
nay teray khuab dekhay thay
agar ho sakay to kissi din
meray ghar aao
deewaron par khuday hoye
huroof
or bistar par naqsh bayqrari
tum pay ayan karay gi
kay meri aarzoo'oan nay kis
tarah tumhari aarzoo ki hai
or kessay meray khuabon nay
tumharay khuab dekhay hain
agar ho sakay to kissi din
meray ghar aao

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Posted on November, 07 2012 09:48:34 AM